WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.
We have been learning to hook our reader in just with are writing. I shoes night sky because I thourt the image is Ataahua witch men's beautiful.
What I fawned triki was to do all the vocabulary. What I did well was that I did my beast and I put in vocabulary.
what I can extend my self next time with is that I can do more writing.
I am a Year 4 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Whaea Deb is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, June 24, 2020
Thursday, May 28, 2020
DESCRIBE A MOMENT IN TIME-Diving
WEEK 7 - WALT to hook our reader in with our first sentence.
WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.
I am heading to a injured dolphin in the demon blue Fijian sea. I am getting distracted by the amazing rough rock path.
WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.
I am heading to a injured dolphin in the demon blue Fijian sea. I am getting distracted by the amazing rough rock path.
Friday, May 8, 2020
Tuesday, May 5, 2020
Mum
MUM
Mum you are the best.you make me so happy and you look after me like I am a queen. You are the best ever and you are always there for me when I am happy and sad. We laugh together and we dance to all our favorite songs. You bake with me and you help us out. I know you are worried about your mum and dad but I want you to know that I am too. You fill my heart with love and joy. You are so kind not only to us kids but to everyone around. When I am with you I feel so happy and I hope you do too. Mum you are like a best friend to everyone. you are a true mum. I LOVE YOU.
Monday, April 20, 2020
Bugbix for Breakfast
I have been reading a book about bugs with my reading group called Bugbix for Breakfast and here is some things that I put on my slide from my learning.
Essential Workers Thank you Letter
Dear Kaitaia Hospital Staff,
Hi Kaitaia Hospital Staff. My name is Tuva-Lisa and I want to thank you for all you've done for NZ through this past 3 weeks of the Lock down. I know you all have been working hard and I really want to thank you for everything you have done.
We have been washing our hands all the time and we won't let our grandparents go out of their property. They have only gone out once but I try to convince them not to even if it is for a little bit.
My grandad has heart problems and a lot more and we all don't want him to get it because there is a risk of him dying.๐ฃ I have some grandparents in Sweden and we are also very worried for them.
Thank you again, ka kite
Tuva-Lisa
๐ท๐
Hi Kaitaia Hospital Staff. My name is Tuva-Lisa and I want to thank you for all you've done for NZ through this past 3 weeks of the Lock down. I know you all have been working hard and I really want to thank you for everything you have done.
We have been washing our hands all the time and we won't let our grandparents go out of their property. They have only gone out once but I try to convince them not to even if it is for a little bit.
My grandad has heart problems and a lot more and we all don't want him to get it because there is a risk of him dying.๐ฃ I have some grandparents in Sweden and we are also very worried for them.
Thank you again, ka kite
Tuva-Lisa
๐ท๐
Wednesday, March 18, 2020
Kawa of Care Assembly-Draft Writing
WALT understand the Kawa of care and write a recount about our assembly experience.
Check out my draft writing...
One day when the sun was shining Te manga had a exciting day ahead of them.It was Friday and we were having our class assembly!We were having our class assembly at Paparore school on West coast road in the hole.Son all the Paparore whano,teachers and kids were in the hole and it was time for the intro.
After the intro was finished Te Manga came in with music and it was time for me to start talking.I had to talk in a microphone to make my voice louder.I had to say Welcome to our Kawa of care assembly. Before I started talking I had butterflies in my tummy and I was thinking about remembering my lines over and over again.
After all the other acts were finished it was time for me to talk again.As well I had to talk in a microphone to make my voice louder.My second part I had to say Remember if others in the classrooms are not doing the right thing help them out and remind them how to manage their device.Then Alani had to talk and after Alani
was finished it was Atima’s turn to talk.After that it was time for me to talk and I had to say Remember always follow the KAWA OF CARE!!After that everyone started clapping and Kiora said ser can you please hand out the certificates.
Check out my draft writing...
One day when the sun was shining Te manga had a exciting day ahead of them.It was Friday and we were having our class assembly!We were having our class assembly at Paparore school on West coast road in the hole.Son all the Paparore whano,teachers and kids were in the hole and it was time for the intro.
After the intro was finished Te Manga came in with music and it was time for me to start talking.I had to talk in a microphone to make my voice louder.I had to say Welcome to our Kawa of care assembly. Before I started talking I had butterflies in my tummy and I was thinking about remembering my lines over and over again.
After all the other acts were finished it was time for me to talk again.As well I had to talk in a microphone to make my voice louder.My second part I had to say Remember if others in the classrooms are not doing the right thing help them out and remind them how to manage their device.Then Alani had to talk and after Alani
was finished it was Atima’s turn to talk.After that it was time for me to talk and I had to say Remember always follow the KAWA OF CARE!!After that everyone started clapping and Kiora said ser can you please hand out the certificates.
Tuesday, February 12, 2019
Nau mai, haere mai ki tฤnei taonga
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